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We walked along the beach slowly, holding hands.  Over my bathing suit I had a loose, light sarong, blowing in the gentle wind.  I carried my sandals in my hand, while he gripped the other.  His hands were strong and gentle, and nothing was better than when he held my hand in his own.
The smell of the ocean was everywhere, and the sound of the waves was unceasing, and we were silent as we walked.  The late afternoon sun hung over us, threatening to leave us in the dark, but it seemed to smile while is threatened, with a promise: we had all of the time in the world.
The were nothing but the ocean on my right, and nothing of consequence on my left except for the sand and him.  He smiled at me when I looked his way, and I smiled back.  Nothing but the beach was behind us, and nothing but beach ahead of us.  We could have walked for hours and never found the end of the beach, of the sand that gave way beneath our feet, of the ocean that was so calming, of the simple bliss we had then.
At an unspoken and unseen agreement, we stopped and looked at the ocean.  There is nothing that can describe an ocean at sunset, so I will not try.  I will only say that the ocean was beautiful, and everything seemed perfect.
With his arms around me, he whispered words in my ear.  He had said them to me a million times if he'd said them once, and he would say them a million more times later, but nothing would ever make me forget or disregard that particular time when he said to me in his wonderful way, "I love you."
-Elizabeth Anne Radcliffe
©2008-2009 ~shanadian
:iconshanadian:

Author's Comments

Wrote this 3/30/08.

Who is this? It's kind of like a future me... married. I sign it with my pen name because this isn't really me talking.
It's just a married man and woman walking along the beach...

As I wrote it, I tried to imagine different guys I know as the guy, but none of them really fit... This isn't even really me. I don't even like the beach. ^_^

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:iconxkonohaxtraitorx:
I don't like the beach, either.
But I like hearing about other people who like the beach....
:iconshanadian:
LOL This is supposed to be, like about the last words, "I love you," and the beach is not the point.
This is one of those things we read in English class and people are like, 'What's the point?" and I am probably thinking that too.

Wow, I wrote something that I don't understand!
:iconrikku-latias:
Join the club. xD

Anyway, there's still nice descriptions and a nice mood. =D The rather long sentences make it seem nice and peaceful.

--
"Don't you think the symbol for 'sodium' is a little abstruse?"
"Nah."
:iconxkonohaxtraitorx:
I got the point... I normally love those sorts of things ♥♥

I thought you made it seem extremely beautiful, though. I could tell there was a lot of feeling coursing through it. -gives it a thumbs up-
:iconshanadian:
I don't even know where it came from but I was working on something else when I couldn't get the beginning of it out of my head, "We walked along the beach, holding hands."
So I just dropped the other things and wrote that.
:iconxkonohaxtraitorx:
You know it's good if I give it a thumbs up!! : D
:iconshanadian:
Yeah!

*the rest of this comment was really dirty so let's not dishonor this nice piece of writing*

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